Violence:
(as I consider violence) yes.
Explicit language: sometimes.
Sex: almost.
Erotism: too dark too see it!
Humor: sometimes.
This
is one of the most complicate stories to write. It's very
serious and it contains parts that may offend you. Also it was planned as a storyboard and it's very very explanative. Hope you won't find it bored. This show the past of Fade and the hell she had
to pass throught, now her nightmare came back wanting
something from her!
Black
screen.
On background you can hear the buggie jeep brakes and
stops.
Everything is silence, then you can hear soft and strange
noises which are getting higher.
A
door opens.
You can realize it's the inside of the winnebago. The
scene gets a little lighter but it's still dark.
Fade
makes a step and enters in the bago (she's walking backward)
Murdoc enters after her.
(Fade's skates are untied)
Noises of moaning and deep breath.
Fade
and Murdoc go to the left,
they're kissing and stuff.
They
go out and the door closes (as Murdoc closed it by a foot).
Fade
kicks away a skate while they continue to walk to the
left.
(Noise of the skate falling)
Noise
of the second skate falling.
Fade goes down (Fade without skates is shorter than Murdoc)
They exit to left.
Empty
BKG (left is dark grey; right is grey; they're black)
They (you know who) enter in turning the corner and lean
against the wall.
Fade: Mhhh...
Murdoc:
Ehe!
Murdoc starts biting Fade's
neck while she takes away his shirt.
Murdoc
makes the shirt fall down.
Murdoc
grabs Fade's shoulders and he turns her to the camera,
then they walk ahead until the screen gets black.
CUT
(They're dark grey, now, not black)
Continuing kisses noises and moaning.
(It's
still dark, but I'm finishing all my pencil, so I won't
color these pics!)
Murdoc lifts Fade's shirt.
And
she takes it off.
F:
Moan...
They
exit the scene then
SLOW ZOOM IN to the window on the dark carpark.
A
dark shadow quickly passes in front of the window and
exits to the left.
Murdoc
and Fade continue their business... F:
Mhhh.. *smooch*
Yes... let's make it...
Suddenly,
a white light brights the scene from the outside.
Murdoc
and Fade turn at it.
Murdoc
grabs Fade out M:
OUT! OUT FROM HERE!!
Someone
shoots twice.
They
fall on the ground, noises of steps running away.
F:
AHHH!!! THEY'RE SHOOTING US!! Who's doing?
M:
I dunno! I'm sure I'd paid all the congestion charge bills!!
M:
Let me take the rifle! Stay down!
Muds
runs to the rifle and blahblahblah! (Horrible drawing!)
Murdoc
stops
Murdoc's
point of view.
Three shoots break the glass, but the bullets don't enter
in.
